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Made to Order

I sit in the same room but never really seen.
A whisper of wind stirring the farthest bitter sweet memory
You reach for me... through me. Passing through for the remote
I go to the kitchen and drink some sweet tea
You walk in and ask who drank the sweet tea, apparently nobody.
The shade of friendship passed and destroyed hopes
The wraith of someone so long ago forgotten
So the me inside was just enough to leave a bitter taste on the tongue?
That ringing in your ears?
Silent pleas, that no one hears.
Pains of the ghostliest blades
Accompany my howling serenades.
A distant melody you cant quite place
Or was it that you HATED the real me? Covered in fresh wounds and pastel pink scars.
FUCK THAT!!! So now we have the answer.
Out with what I am
Redefine What I WILL be
Tear out the old
Hope Happiness Hate
In with the new
Cold Calculating Callus
So tell me do you like the new me?
MADE TO ORDER from your own HATE!

Author notes

Just thoughts that some will question others will deny.
Written August 20th, 2006

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  • Desire gold member
    August 21, 2006
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    Much Love to You!!

    my Friend!!
    You are there for others...Anytime...
    Anywhere...and
    I have to tell You Thank You...
    for always being You without reservation!

    Know You are Appreciated and Loved!!
    There maybe days that...as I say:
    Sucks Chickens...but I learn from that experience

    I wish You nothing but Happiness!!
    I'm Blessed to call You Friend-
    Honored to read the pieces You pen and
    Humbled to exchanged words with You!!

    May You find what You Seek!
    May it come to You in the manner You wish!
    May You always be Blessed Wayne!
    Always-
    ..I Applaud You for expression..
    and not to hide what You feel inside!

    Many more Blessings to You~
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • vampira1665 silver member
    August 20, 2006
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    Never change my dear Demon. That which is inside, that which haunts you....makes you who you are. And I for one like the real you.

    I have grown in many ways, learned to read what is inside others is just one. You, I have always known and am glad I have. Please remember that in the end it is only you so what others say, think, or tell you makes no difference. Only how YOU live, love and in the end die.

    Hugs and bites my dear,

    Vampy