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And It Breaks

And as they go there separate ways
shes still dying to have the chance to say
all those things he'll never know
and her heartbeats to a slow
stop- this isn't how things were suppose to be,
you were suppose to be THE ONE
that changed everything;
but you instead beat them all
and held my hand, watched me fall.
You never took the time to guess
you were the reason I'm such a mess.

You kissed the girl who broke your heart,
you fell in love; ripped me apart,
but that's OK, we've reached our end
and this is where a new chapter must begin.
So as i break these thoughts with these lines
with all my memories of those times;
you were never real enough to love,
i should have never tried; Ive had enough.

So here we are as the Summer end,
and as always were just friends.
Ill watch you break yourself again
by adoring those who bring you pain.
You laugh it off like you don't care
but you know; Ive got you there.
You cant deny it anymore
you've got it rough;
and your not so tough, anymore.

I held my tongue all those times
when you went on about her eyes;
I never told how much i cared
just wishing i had a place in you heart
but its so cold in there;
you kicked me out
you lost your chance
to have that perfect romance.
You'll break your heart loving her
but that's OK; your not so sure
of yourself- your not so tough anymore.

Author notes

A friends poem inspired me..
Written August 20th, 2006

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  • Aisling1221
    February 9, 2007
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    AWW!

    This is so sad, Christy!!! I actually think I can relate a TINY bit, but... even if I couldn't the words and the way you wrote it get it through and it hurts! *sniffle* I'm sorry... hopefully things are going well for you now, though! Love you!

  • laterrkiddos
    September 22, 2006
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    yolie loves your christina :] and this will always be my favorite poem, ever.


  • Sindrel
    September 15, 2006
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    Extremely well thought out. Your emotion shows through vividly.

    Keep writing those master pieces.


  • Ravenblood
    August 21, 2006
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    i liked that, just everything about it, the way she was there for the guy until she had enough and he missed out. good write.