Opening the gates,showing the light.
Exposing the soul, in naked flight.
Ascending spirits, climb the heavens,
breathing vistas, shattering chevrons.
Intensities building, release of facades,
no longer restrained,ambrosia for Gods.
Star dusted trails, drift on whispering winds,
parfumed essence falls,the spirit is cleansed.
A mask of folly mad laughter and tragedy,
flail shattering ends,of a prison that used to be.
Steel bars can not silence the voice of a soul,
when elations gleam as a psyche unfolds.
Ethereal beginnings, reborn in celestial reigns,
the psyche released, flows in spiritual veins.
~~Suseann~~
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Written August 20th, 2006
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Beautiful the way you made the picture into a spiritual transformation is great. Bravo thanks for entering and best of luck.
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Excellant /intriguing
A great and unique write, as one who has a New Thought background, I really appreciate this. Thanks for sharing. -
Another beauty from you my friend! I have wrapped myself in your words and in the end, rebirth... One thing I most agree with, "Steel bars cannot silence the soul", love that statment... Excellent sweetie! Have a beautiful evening filled with much love and joy! Love you, Mirage
Edited on Aug 21, 10:47 p.m. because 'Typing boo boo'. -
Like a freedom and release from emotional prisons within?
Lovely photo with this my friend hope you have a good week.
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In the last couplet, there should be an "s" on "reign", and here:
parfumed essence fall,the spirit is cleansed. (essence falls, the)
I was stopped for a second by "chevron", but it didn't throw me off much. It's such an odd, rarely used word, that I stopped a second to think about it. Not that it didn't work, it just stopped me.
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O my, Suse, how truly captivating and exquisite. The whole presentation is simply breathtaking. Ooh la la
Belle
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