black velvet petals-
beautifully beguiling
malevolence grows
Author notes
traditional 5-7-5 haiku
Written August 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- Tanka and Haiku by sheltered.
450 points, ended January 19, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hate Me, Kill Me by thorlorn thanatos.
380 points, ended March 30, 2007, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewritten Haiku & Tanka. by TheSpiralGenerator.
1000 points, ended April 1, 29 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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CONGRADULATIONS ON THE bronze
double blessings, a koi of ku's
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yin and yang
sometimes blessings come in the oddest packages, well done -
Dark and evil... I like it
Good luck in the contest
Ryan
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Oooo...
I never knew I was a fan of dark poetry until I came to this site. It is growing on me. I really liked this one a lot. I'm guessing it is about a black rose. Nice job.
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thanks very much my friend,
much appreciated,
alex. -
Great
This is a little gem, Alex. I like the tone of seductive evil here--it reminds me somewhat of Blake's "Invisible Rose."
Cheers,
Bill -
thanks very much!
floorboards. -
Fantastic!!!
Congratulations on your haiku and your trophy!
Wonderfully done!
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A wonderfully profound and deep Haiku. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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Another little gem. I just cant get my head around this style and you make it look so easy. good luck Alex.
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thank you my friend, very much appreciated,
alex
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This is very good Alex good luck in the contest my friend
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cheers jan!, wouldn't like to blow me own bugle my friend
alex
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shudders. pretty nifty at these, aren't ya? good one alex. jan
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