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Suicidal Roses(Lilliam Rhyme Form)

Oh, fairest rose of purest touch,
With my lineage upon you seeping,
It is my soul that you doth clutch.

I feel your thorn inside my wrist,
With the blood that runs beside,
And it makes me believe that I exist.

I see your bloom begin to wilt,
While sorrow escapes my eyes,
Because in you I view my guilt.

Now, as your petals begin to slide,
I sense my spirit lull to sleeping,
And in only you this I confide.

I isolated myself from all of them,
Because I let my fears reside,
And for this I myself condemn.

I feel the coldness begin to invade,
Singing the Reaper's song I despise,
And I embrace my destruction unafraid.

Author notes

I'm a little suicidal right now. This is a form I created called The Lilliam Rhyme.
Written August 20th, 2006

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  • TwistedBloodyLilly silver member
    August 20, 2006
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    thank you!

    Thank you! I usually don't like short poetry but I guess your contest inspired me. Thanks again. ~Lilly~


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    August 20, 2006
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    Very compelling and a wonderfully dark penned write. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.