What Story
WHat story can I tell?
The curtain for scene two is drawn
the actors and actresses bow
and sweets devided.
And I stand far away,look on,
a rose in my hand, plucked
from the land of a thousand flowers.
My legs still ache..
those dance steps practices
for act two.
From my hand drops an old, crumbled note,
'come help us with scene two,
shortage of actresses.'
kessie
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Written August 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- ANY THING by serenity silvermoon.
430 points, ended May 10, 2007, 145 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was a great poem i love it it was sad but happy your date reminded me of when i was 12 i tryed to set myself on fire because my uncle gary killed himself on the first i want to thank you for sharing this wonderful poem god bless you and keep you and love you forever and always sign dianna lee green also knowned serenity lynn silvermoon or angel serenity
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And I stand far away,look on,
a rose in my hand, plucked
from the land of a thousand flowers.
My legs still ache..
those dance steps practices
for act two.
This land of a thouand flowers is a nice phrase.
It must be very beautiful.
joss -
...a wish for encore? Backstage feelings surface here, but sometimes the understudy takes the spotlight.
You are not short on talent.
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Some grumpy notes, thanks.
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KOOOLIO!
IT TOOK ME A SEC... LOL! I LIKE IT A LOT! THANK YOU FOR SHARING
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