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Synchronicity for Maatkara

In a hurried spin of torrent streams,
often I've wondered what it means.
When we trip across in synchronicity,
parallel paths of simultaneous harmonies.

In a scattered law of daily occurrence,
preventing us from a shared coherence.
Camouflaged cloaked & unintentionally veiled,
Hidden hues of aspired equality is quelled.

"But oh", that magic of sweet synchronicity,
in that fleeting instant of collective symphonies.
When two like minds meet in collaboration,
gives my heart reason for celebration.

Elated streams criss cross in ascension,
of mutual aspirations too grand to mention.
Imbibing in a dizzy drink of spirituality,
in shared professed sameness of philosophy.

                     ~~Suseann~~
Dedicated to my good soulful friend Maatkara who inspired this piece with her soul's overflow of beauty.




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Written August 19th, 2006

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  • Maatkara gold member
    February 8, 2007
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  • capricornpoet
    August 19, 2006
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    two of the same soul

    This poem was quite lucid as sometimes beauty mirors beauty, loved the image as the poem holds it to perfection . Unique and
    mystic this was ...parallel paths of butterfly and roses ,
    an instant of harmony, just genial ..and wonderful tribute .
    poetic harmony.


  • suseann
    August 19, 2006
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    Thank you lilblueeyes,glad you enjoyed.


  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    August 19, 2006
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    beautiful tribute to a good friend. I hope you have this kind of joy forvever and enjoy it while you have it. thanks for hsaring this with us. and keep up the good work.


  • ma belle
    August 19, 2006
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    The image is just magnificient. Didn't think it could get any better and it did!

  • Maatkara gold member
    August 19, 2006
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    Oh my goodness! This is such a beautiful and touching expression of your dear heart, suseann
    You've done it again!! - just when I get a kick to my heart from someone, you're there to soothe it with such an incredibly sweet surprise!

    Now that's some kind of boomerang synchronicity, woah!

    Thank you sweetheart - this means so much to me right now

    Bless you!


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 19, 2006
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    Me, too. She's calmed my tempest~strewn waters more than once. Yes, the Swan can get a lil' riled, too.

  • suseann
    August 19, 2006
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    I personally don't know how I stayed centered before becoming acquainted with her. She has a genteel way of nudging me in the calm right direction.Ha!
    Edited on Aug 19, 3:16 p.m. because ''.

  • Night Hope gold member
    August 19, 2006
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    "When we trip across in synchronicity,
    parallel paths of simultaneous harmonies."

    Ahhh, what a lovely penning for the beautiful Gennelle, suse...She deserves each & every line...She is not only a very talented Soul, she's an a very kind & enlightened one, with a grand sense of humor...Hmmm...Come to think of it, she does kinda remind me of someone... She'll absolutely love it & you for writing it, my Friend...Wonderfully done...I've often said I believe God puts certain people in our Path at certain times for certain reasons...Perhaps they aren't meant to stay any longer than it takes to pass on their lessons to us; perhaps they are meant to be there at our sides from then on...One never knows...The idea is to welcome them & cherish them while they are there...Good for you for doing just that, my Friend... Wander

  • suseann
    August 19, 2006
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    Thank you Belle.I've changed the image on it.The other one took to long to show up.Hope this one works.What's your thoughts? And yes,Gen is a mystical heart of alert to the needs of others kinda lady.
    Edited on Aug 19, 2:51 p.m. because ''.

  • ma belle
    August 19, 2006
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    Dear Suseanne, what a beautiful tribute to your soul-mate friend. I am sure she will be delighted to see this written in honor of her. From what I know about her, she is a beautiful poet. Belle

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