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Silent eyes




Silent

Eyes





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Eyes are silent because they don't think.
Written August 19th, 2006

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  • jean-marc silver member
    November 11, 2006
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    thank you very much, buddy, for your kind attention and inspiring remark. with kindest wishes to you and your relatives.

  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 10, 2006
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    Jean-marc, I have been viewing multiple poems of yours. I find the simplicity beautiful. They will become points of contemplation, for in their simplicity lies the substance of the Universe.
    Peace, Buddy

  • jean-marc silver member
    August 22, 2006
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    dear wolfie, thank you for your kind appreciation. i love also simplicity. probably because i need to live it more deeply in myself.

  • WolfHeart silver member
    August 21, 2006
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    breath taking


    silent eyes - free of condemnation... I love this in its simplicity!

    hugs Wolfie/WordGoddess

  • jean-marc silver member
    August 20, 2006
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    dear ingrid, thank you for your comment. yes, eternity can be expressed under many ways. thank you for reminding it.

  • joyful silver member
    August 20, 2006
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    So beautiful in It`s reduction!
    Silent
    eyes

    the same like,

    wide,
    twinkling
    landscape

  • jean-marc silver member
    August 20, 2006
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    thank you, scorpio rising, for your kind feedback and appreciation.

  • scorpio rising
    August 19, 2006
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    Free from judgement and opinion!

    Silent I eyes!

    I have deep respect for you, your thoughts, your mind!


    This was probably the most profound entry, really made me think, which I like. Although I do believe that sometimes,, some eyes do judge, they speak louder and are more hurtful than any words! Yet, also more pleasent, encouragng and loving than any such words!

    Right On!

  • jean-marc silver member
    August 19, 2006
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    thank you, dear ankeeta. as they are silent, they are free from judgement and opinion.

  • Ankeeta silver member
    August 19, 2006
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    whoa!!!..true true...my eyes are the dumb organs....if ever i didnt have these ...i think i would have percived His world in a better way
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