Xx chromosomes make up this girl,
Xanthic hair with no curl.
Compassionate and kind to whom she wants
Arrogant? Vain? Well, sometimes she flaunts.
Reality is what she hides from every day,
Collapsing to the floor-- tried to make it go away.
Running from everything, whether present or past,
Annoyance comes too easily, but never does it last.
Sexy, strong, and one of kind
Hyperactive thoughts running through her mind.
Humorous, witty, she can do all
Unfortunately, models all have to be tall.
Manic or sedate, it depends on her mood.
Object to her will, and you'll be screwed
Random, passionate, it's all part of this girl.
Xx chromosomes, and
Xanthic hair with no curl.
Author notes
uhmmm yeah.. first try at an acrostic.
[that was hard haha!]
ps. xanthic= yellowish
Written August 19th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Who Are You?(Acrostic Challenge)3 {Trophy Collection only} by mzblondemoments.
300 points, ended August 31, 2006, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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thanks Steve!
I appreciate it
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well thank you
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For a first try at an acrostic you did an amazing job, especially with the "X" . And congratulations on the Bronze trophy. A well deserved win!
Steve -
Congratulations on your trophy in this great contest
Gaylene
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yayy! thank you so much
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Please remove your poem from this contest and place it here.
allpoetry.com/poem/2208860
Thank you and Congratulations!!!
~much love~
carol
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Thanks!
I really appreciate you reading and commenting
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You have done an excellent job for you first try at an acrostic and with 4 x's. I am impressed. I really love the lines:
Arrogant? Vain? Well, sometimes she flaunts.
Reality is what she hides from every day,
It is great that you realize that you hide reality. Some people hide it, but don't even realize tha they are.
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thanks Carol! I thought your contest was fun... and I've always been too scared to try and write my own acrostic lol, but I read yours.. and I liked it a lot!
anyways, thanks for the comment and good luck judging!!
xx-Crash
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wow, thanks so much!!
I really appreciate your kind words....
xx-Crash
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OH MY GOSH! This is your first try at an acrostic?! Well, in my opinion, it is one of the best that I have read so far. I loved the vocabulary, the detail/descriptions, the grammatical structure that supports your words, and the imagery. You are a fantastic writer and I only hope to see more of your writing in the future. Keep up the great work, thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you for your entry in my contest. I really wasn't expecting the X's to used in the acrostic but you have used them well. You have done an excellent job on your first acrostic.I enjoyed it immensely,rhyming was great, a wonderful vision of the real you.
These lines say alot:
"Arrogant? Vain? Well, sometimes she flaunts.
Reality is what she hides from every day,
Collapsing to the floor-- tried to make it go away.
Running from everything, whether present or past,
Annoyance comes too easily, but never does it last"
Best of luck in the contest.
~much love~
carol
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aww thank you!!
i missed you too!
xx-Crash
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<3 i missed you SOOOOOOO much. i love you're writing.
This acrostic is really good.. its you're first one?
A-mazing.
write more, dear.. and i'll try too..
writing seems to come so naturally to you..
it makes me jealous..
i wish i could critiqe this.
but its perfect in every way.
i love you, dear.
<3 brandi
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