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Under The Willow Tree.

I stand under the willow tree
And watch the clouds fly by.
All I can hear,
Is the sound of your breathing.

The sun falls down,
Beating against my face.
All I feel,
Is your hands in mine.

The breeze blowls lightly,
Caressing my soft skin.
All I see,
Is the smile on your face.

Love to me,
Is every feature on you.
Is every sway of your body next to mine.
Every smile you give me.

I'm in love.
And under the willow tree.
I finally believe,
There will be a happy ending.

Unless of course,
All of this,
And the willow tree,
Is a dream...

Author notes

I can no longer tell the difference between reality and dreams...
But, I know that love, is real, in both worlds.
And so is this love...
Written August 19th, 2006

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  • NoMoreTears063
    August 19, 2006
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    Awe

    Matty
    i love your work
    keep writting i miss reading it
    it always makes me smile
    ur such a sweeteheart
    thanks 4 everything
    -Nicole