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Ciao! Beautiful

Ciao Beautiful!
As I write
My chest becomes tight.
Tiny moist drops want to leave my eyes.
No such person provides these days of my life
With happiness and bliss quite like you!
"You're Beautiful!"
Forever I will remember this music.
Every thought of you becomes dance.
You've helped me realize
I can still feel
And sigh
And laugh
And cry.
Unlike most, these feelings are felt on the inside.
Seems a beautiful rainbow has now entered my life.
You are my Sugar AND my Spice.
Thoughts of you are,
And forever shall be...
Pleasant!
Nice!

Anthony E. Barr
23 Aug 2oo5

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Author notes

Thank you Katarzyna
Forever & Beyond,

Anthony E. Barr
Written August 23rd, 2005

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  • NickBlaze
    August 19, 2006
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    A bit too sugery for me, but I still didn't think it was half-bad. That's a good thing. >_>