I'm a state
a-w-a-y
&&
body and mind,
we're all alone.
But my ♥ is full,
hanging heavy
with your lust soaked words,
gently marked by your
oh-so perfect lips.
I swear,
I could kiss you
Forever,
floating water into my soul.
Its those eyes of yours.
Baby Blue,
strong and proud,
&&
you're seeping into every inch of me.
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Written August 19th, 2006
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frickin sweet
hey this is great you a gret writer you should think of makin a book er sumthin but thats jus me talkin your i loove ur stuff it sounds like ur heart is writing in stead of you typin lol -
Thanks so much. This is what I was writing in Baltimore while laying on the floor.
He makes me so happy.
He just left my house and I havnt stopped smiling since
♥Stac -
omg this is the best thing you've ever written! i love it so much! and i can tell you love him too. i think you've got yourself a keeper, definitely. this poem makes me smile cuz its a perfect scenario. and by the way, how did you make a heart? great write!
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