The warmth in my eyes will soon subside
Its not worth the nights I've cried
This game you've played is almost at an end
This time it will be hard to amend
Baby, I must be doing too much
Because all I'm thinking about is your touch
Sitting here my eyes are welling
Unfortunately you wont find this compelling
Where do you see me in your life
In your mind is this worth the strife
When you look into my eyes what do you see?
I sometimes feel we live to disagree
My waking thought in the morning, last thought at night
Baby, I'll tell you, I feel contrite
I don't want to smother you, I just want to be there
Believe me when I say that I really do care
Sitting here, my mind is at war
Sometimes I want to walk right out that door
But baby, I love you so deeply, and I love you so much
I cannot bear to imagine such
Sometimes I think you ignore the phone
But to me, this is unknown
Every waking moment I am missing you
Sometimes, I just wish that you'd miss me too
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i dont know about him anymore
Written August 18th, 2006
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This is very good. You flow very nicely form one line to another.
thi is also filled with greif and sorrow, I'll tell you that if this person acts as she does she dpes not deserve you. Take yourself away form the greif caused by this relationship and move to another. It may be diffucult but it will be better for the future.
i hope you get the strength to be able to move on.
grl
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There are some really good lines, but I think trying to rhime has left some of them a little flat. I bet if you wrote on this subject again free-form you'd really get some good stuff down.
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