Can I never be good enough?
It seems no matter what I do that
somebody gets hurt or let down.
well what about me?
What about my feelings and me getting let down
every time somebody leaves or
a voice or hand is raised?
How about every time I hear people tlak bad
about one another I'm caught in the middle
Not able to do anything but sit back and listen?
Cant you people see that I have feelings too?
I'm not invisible; Although I wish I were.
It's almost as if nobody really knows me,
or what goes on inside my head.
You know, I may be young,
but I understand just as much as the next person.
Life, death, happiness, let downs, fights...
I get it all.
Will you ever seem to realize that?
I'm just like the rest,
going through my ups-and-downs
that are most of the time worse than yours.
I'll keep going.. keep pushing on;
until the day comes when I cant take
anything anymore and I
END IT.
Author notes
ok.. yea. i dont feel like writin ne thing bout it really. things crashed down on me today.. so here we go. my first poem in a while.. hope u like it.
Written August 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- The Pages Of Your Soul by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended March 16, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Thank you for the entry, the feelings inside are deep and painful...I'm sorry this is the way you feel. I sometimes feel this way also, I just have to keep telling myself that people can not always appreciate us because they also have their strains and pains to deal with; and we help them through. I hope your situation improves.
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GREAT poem! I LOVED IT! there's just something about ur poems that...i dunno. it's hard to explain! they're just AMAZING!! especially this one! Thanks for sharin this and I see u changed your name too! i like that one! heehee keep on writin!
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It would probably not be a good idea if you ended it...I would miss you!!!! BTW, I'm sorry I got so angry at you yesterday...I was just disapointed cuz I was really looking forward to spending the day with you again...just like old times!!! So call me...I kind of have some pretty big news...talk to ya laytah!!! Love ya boo!!!
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heyy i loved this!! great great great poem!!!! things REALLY crashed down on me today too! so i get how you feel! i LOVED the poem!!!! really!!!! i mean!! seriously!! for real!! haha!! i love ya rashella!!!!
hugs&kisses~chicaboo
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