You don't want to know me
I'm like an annoying bee
I'm worse then anything you know
I make everyone feel low
I wish that I would die
Make a noose be sure to tie
Learn to love all you see
It might not be happily
Learn to see everything that goes on
Before it all is gone
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Written December 10th, 2001
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*Aww, Hugs*. Well, the rhyme seems forced, but the message is really sad, even tragic, but the last 2 lines almost seem like they don't fit in with the rest of the poem (The first half is all "I am horrible, dont get to know me" and the next is "Love everything".) But still, good poem, any hey, you're younger (Younger than ME, GASP!) things do get better, remember that.
Abby -
distant hug distand hug..i dont agreat though but distant hug
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I want to know you!!
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I like knowing you! i'm an annoying little bee, not you... bee happy :)
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its beautifull
i dont agree
but it's beautifull -
What a beautiful, tragic poem. A good write, thanks for sharing me
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