Do you like my fishing rod?
its shattered now but years ago
it caught fish by the tonne
so you think my face is wrinkled
lost its sparkle, its pizzazz
just shut yer face n listen son
im not yer average ‘garden gnome’
drooling wisdom at yer feet
on the nurses one to one
and next time you reject me I’ll be back
to do the decent thing and you’ll
never think you’ll miss me ‘till its done.
Author notes
This is a rant by an old person at all the scum out there who treat him badly. I promise i'll read everyone elses entrys honest.
Written August 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Don't Lie To Me by fall3n ang3lus.
400 points, ended August 28, 2006, 16 entries
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well, this is an interesting poem, i've never really read anything quite like it. you can change the name of it, just press the edit button by the poem name, and then you can change the title (i think). thanks for entering & good luck!
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actually ive just realised ive made a terrible terrible mistake the poems actually a prewrite n its supposed to be called The Garden Gnome oh bum please dont let the crap title put you off!
Edited on Aug 19, 1:18 p.m. because ''.
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