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Last Week of Summer

Summer is quickly coming to an end
And look! Fall is just around the bend!
Back to school I’m about to go
To learn many things I don’t yet know

So now there’s no more sleeping in
That’s what happens when school begins
Have to set the alarm clock for five
Then off to school I have to drive

Have to put on clothes, shoes and socks
All to listen as the boring teacher talks
But oh well, that’s how life is, right?
At least I can catch up on sleep I miss at night

But wait! Summer is not over yet!
Let’s turn on the sprinkler and get all wet
So come on and go back out into the sun
Until summer is over, we’ll continue to have fun!


by Sharcu (Tim)

Author notes

*Option*: 4

Thought up this poem last night before going to bed and it fits perfectly within this contest.  I was suppose to go back to school last Tuesday, but (long story short) I'm going this Monday. So ya, only 3 days left of summer and I'm work 14 hours just in the next two days  Thanks for reading!
Written August 18th, 2006

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  • Sparkee
    August 23, 2006
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    I really miss summer vacations because of this war and because I graduated last year.


  • LittleAnn
    August 21, 2006
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    A cool poem, quite funny! I'm happy I have ten more days before I have to go back to school... I'm looking forward to it though...
    But I can understand your thoughts...
    Congrats on the trophy and keep on writing!
    LittleAnn

  • pozo
    August 20, 2006
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    Wow- Americans go back early, we go back in September. You probably start earlier than us or something, though. I liked this poem a lot. Keep writing, I liked the rhyme here
    All the best
    Pozo


  • RevHead
    August 20, 2006
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    ha! that's kool!! I love how you wrote that you did an awesome job I can so relate (except i dont drive to school...) but that was an awesome piece. Loved it NMNM


  • FireyAura
    August 18, 2006
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    Oh, I feel your pain, and I know how long and boring school can be. I'm sorry. I miss the late nights But really, I hope that you have a great school year
    ~*Chelsea*~

  • lillmissunshine
    August 18, 2006
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    Hey tim,
    this is such a great poem. I loved it, and it was so true. No more late nights... and especially hearing the boring teachers talk.


  • Frogzter gold member
    August 18, 2006
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    I only wish that I could go back to school! I could have easily been a professional student and stayed in College until they kicked me out! I loved school and if not for the outrageous cost of it, I'd still be there! This is a great piece. It will still be like summer here for months yet to come. It is so HOT here in Florida. It may cool off a bit around late October... lol

    keep up the good work and best wishes to you at school
    blessings,
    Frog~


  • OnlyInMyDreams
    August 18, 2006
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    Awww, i like this poem a lot its really good!. And your poem tells it all, Love summer and have fun until the very last minute. Thanks for entering!!You did a great job with the rhyming too.

    Love Always,
    Kara

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