I'd die tomorrow if I could.
I'd take all the pain and
Wash it down the drain and
Let it flow:
Flow far...
far...
away...
Because you called me fake.
Look into these eyes!
Do you not see truth?
Am I one of the drones
That try to conqure the world,
With all my dominance and
Lack of confidnece and
Zero Hope?
I hate feeling this way...
Because you called me fake.
Now I'm staring into a whole,
New world ahead of me.
A world where I am
Nothing like you
Thought I would be.
Because you called me fake.
Now it's all your fault.
You have no guilt to
All the suffering you
Made me go through HELL!
And this barrell-ly helps.
Because I can't see,
Down this tube at what's coming.
And you made me this way....
Because you--
Called...
Me...
Fake...
Author notes
Dark poems ARE my specialty.
Written August 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Dark contest!! by -Tears Of Pain-.
301 points, ended August 22, 2006, 16 entries
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Greatness..lol...I've been through something like this before but it was diffrent. I liked this a lot. I liked how you repeated a line through out the poem...And I liked how you started by having the words fall and how you ended it like that too...Great job! Good luck in my contest!
~^Sara^~
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