I seem to be slowly fading
As you are slowly forgetting
I seem to be slowly falling
As you are no longer regretting
I am hiding from the world
So no one can break me again
I am hiding from you
So I never have to hear the end
And I ask you
Can you hear me
And I ask you
Can you feel me
And I listen
And I hear no reply
And I wait
And feel nothing where you lie
I am numb
I am lost
But Ill find my way out of the shadows
Whatever the cost
If I cant have your hand
To guide me through my sorrows
Ill just have to keep
Looking forward to tomorrow
Dont ask me whats wrong
Dont ask me foolish questions
Just move along please
Its just another life long lesson
My mind is full of thoughts
No one will understand
They cant be told
They cant be written by hand
And I ask you
Can you hear me
And I ask you
Can you feel me
And I listen
And I hear no reply
And I wait
And feel nothing where you lie
I am numb...
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Written August 18th, 2006
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Just another life long lesson, we keep on repeating
Your words are very deep and very true, I wish I could say that I don't know how it feels but I do, It's so hard to face the dawn, When love that you once lived for is gone,I know now to cut losses when there's more pain than gain, We can't kill ourselves from within in vain. I really felt this piece, I'm going through the hardest shit ever, this piece has meaning to it.
Thanks for your comment on my piece, I'm new to this and I think you're my first viewer aside from my
EX-Love Whom I still love, whom I hope still loves me? anyway good work
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some are waiting for you yet lol nice poem angel hope your okay
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woooooohhhoooooooooooo this poem as i say is the titayz! o and if u need a hand Ive got two so u can have one! lol anyways awesome poem! Mab Ill comment all of them! lol like the pics hahahah!
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..wow..this was VERY well written! i enjoyed reading it! great job
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