Cursed by her lust, and craving,
Earthly, she is, but yearning.
Naive be mortal man's desire,
Tween her folds, forever burning.
Aching with the touch of her flesh,
Undulating for my passion.
Rise, fall in body and breath, she
Sins within my seduction.
Quivering in ecstasy, her pleasure
Undenied. Seeking that
Elysium, eyes burst open wide.
Sighs escape in pure orgasmic light,
The beast I am, her savage delight.
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Written August 18th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Erotic Images Contest-Adults Only by JeannieD Hunter.
350 points, ended August 20, 2006, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your words.
Storm -
Dear Poetess
Fested upon are you
biten you succulently bleed
by he who chews
violent is your need.
AT -
Thank you for the comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
Congrats on gold. A wonderful write you have graced us with. Captured the spirit of the picture very well.
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Thank you for the comment, appreciate it.
Storm -
Superb
To late for a brilliant comment, suffice to say SSSSmokin. As I said before you are the one to be compared to.
Pure Thought -
I thought you said you wanted to get wet. But then I went back and reread the comment. Uh, too late now.
I love the pic, and it just was kind of there, ya know? Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.
Storm -
WOW!! Gulp, I can just imagine!!! Whew, TOO much I can imagine!! Great job on this. Damn it is hot in here. Never had an acrostic do this to me before!! Thanks! Good luck. Jeannie
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Thank you Sandy, appreciate it.
Storm -
Right on, girl...right on! This is awesome!
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Thank you Vickie. I did like the pic, so it was actually pretty easy to use for inspiration. Glad you enjoyed hun.
Storm -
Oh Autumn, this is awesome. I looked at the picture you used, and like wow. A bit of dark, a bit of fantasy, a lot of lust. I really like this. You did such a wonderful job. Good luck hon.
My love to you
Vickie
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