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Love on the Aisle

Here I am lying all alone
So much tears fall as I cry
One is right and the other is wrong
I cannot choose between the two of them


Here I am now on the aisle
I have to stay here till I decide
I know I can take away myself here
Eventually, my heart would be healed


Maybe I would just let time fix it
Let it be where it is now
But if my thinking goes well
It can be on the right way


I hate myself this way
But I am just human
Who can do right and wrong
I'm not hopeless, in time, it'll get fixed!


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Written August 17th, 2006

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  • wings of an angel
    August 18, 2006
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    This is a very good write that you had penned here


  • sfesquivel
    August 18, 2006
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    Ok if thats what u think. Its just common thats why u said that but I was the one who did it.


  • NickBlaze
    August 18, 2006
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    I was hoping you wouldn't ask. I found the poem rather boring and unoriginal...


  • sfesquivel
    August 18, 2006
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    Its implied. Would u like to give a comment?


  • NickBlaze
    August 18, 2006
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    "So much tears fall as I cry"

    What ELSE happens when you cry? O.o

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