Hidden among the foliage of the giant spruce trees
High amidst the branches where nobody sees
Dwells lively little faeries of the dappled forest scene
Dancing in the sunlight and the deep and leafy green
Entire faerie gardens filled with hope and peace
Dancing in the shadows and flowers so cerise
Following the dirt roads to a place that’s so serene
To the crossing of the rainbow to places yet unseen
Conjuring up their magic to make wishes all come true
As they dance and run and flitter in colors they imbue
Blowing wonderous spells in bubbles far and wide
Being ever ready to be with you at your side
Author notes
Being a lover of nature and faeries, I tried to combine them into this poem. It is also supposed to be an inspirational poem, filled with hope.
Written August 17th, 2006
A contest entry
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What did you think
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This is gorgeous....delights the imagination.
Wonderful rhyme, so beautifully written.
Such a pleasure to read...thank you, I loved it.
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A lovelly poem except Fairy would be better than Faerie.
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I smiled along as I read this and it was delightful. However, the rules state clearly, and even in red that poems entered in any other contests previously would not be accepted. Re-enter something if you wish.
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i agree with everyone! it makes me feel like a child
and the rhyming is not forced in any way and i really
like how it is the faery theme its so different
from everything else that i have read. i like it!
good luck!
laura -
Wonderfull
I'd have to agree with Butterfly Dream, it does make one feel like a kid again,I love it, Great work and Good luck -
Oh, wow! This is great. Thanks a bunch!
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Wow very pretty I love it. It makes one feel like a kid again searching in the woods and flower beds for faeries. I love it and best of luck. Lots Of Love. Nina.
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excellent presentation
This is really beautiful. I love the faerie theme, and you have done a wonderful job on this poem describing their magical and happy existence. Maybe we can join them. lol...
Best wishes in the contest!
Ethereal Melody
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magical
Hey hey! i like! rhymes make it seem effortless and flowing. Gives a carefree feeling with a little magic.
-----Grey
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