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Herzflucht

Kurze Taschen für kurze Gedanken
Was da liegt ist nur ein Stück mein Herz
Kein Blut mehr,
Nur Wörter bleiben

Die Tinte floss vom Hände nach Papier
Ihre Flucht war einen Unfall
Ich sagte meine Gefühle waren gut geschützt
Ich log.

Author notes

no translation given. ((it sounds better in german ^.^))
Written August 17th, 2006

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  • immune2love
    May 30, 2007

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    great

    erm. idk who you are really or i might, but you're lucy, right? well. i read this poem in roar, just droppin by to say i liked it.


  • LittleAnn
    November 19, 2006
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    Thank you for entering out contest! This was a nice poem, keep up the great work and lots of luck at judging!
    *~Annie~*


  • sommerregen
    November 15, 2006
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    Thanks for your entry.
    You have created a picture I can imagine well.
    Good luck

  • Demon Eye
    August 17, 2006
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    I love german, even if I can't speak it *which makes me sad*