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‘Sweetie-pie’ is fine with me
‘Honey’ is all right
‘I love you’ are three blessed words that
Fill me with delight
‘Sweetheart’ makes me melt away
‘My hero’, swells my chest
Of all the things my baby says
‘Oh, Al’ is just the best!
‘Oh, Al, Oh, Al,’
This little phrase is my best pal
I never tire of it’s repeat
Each time is equally a treat
Two small words four little letters
It don’t get any better than
When I hear some sweet young gal sing
‘Al, Oh Al, Oh Al, Oh Al’.
‘Honey buns’ is kinda cute
‘Master’ is a trip
‘Stud muffin’ makes a sweet, sweet sound
When rolling off her lip
‘Let’s do it’ are three lovely words that
thrill me to the bone
‘Please’ is great and ‘Thankyou’s fine but
‘Oh Al’ stands alone
‘Oh, Al, Oh, Al,’
This little phrase is my best pal
I never tire of it’s repeat
Each time is equally a treat
Two small words four little letters
It don’t get any better than
When I hear some sweet young gal sing
‘Al, Oh Al, Oh Al, Oh Al’.
‘Not tonight’ is such a drag
‘I’m tired’ is a curse
‘We just did that on Monday’ sucks
‘Get lost’ is even worse
‘I’m feeling sick’ are three bad words that
fill my heart with fear
but if she says ‘maybe later’
it’s ‘Oh, Al’ I hear!
‘Oh, Al, Oh, Al,’
This little phrase is my best pal
I never tire of it’s repeat
Each time is equally a treat
Two small words four little letters
It don’t get any better than
When I hear some sweet young gal sing
‘Al, Oh Al, Oh Al, Oh Al’.
Author notes
Written August 17th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Your Personal Theme Song!!! by Anger Inside 201.
450 points, ended October 20, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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i did ask for nothing marked as erotic, but it really isn't that bad so i'll leave it in the contest. it is a very nice poem though! it rhymes very nicely and shows what you're thinking. good job and good luck!
Anger Inside 201 -
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Well... it is my signature song... and it could be played on the radio... so I figured that made it OK. I took a chance. Thanks.
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Yay!
Bob & Tom would probably love this one. Was waiting for a 'No Al' that never came. Maybe that's a good thing.
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'AL, oh AL oh Al...the words of love and take me higher...singing throughout the air
you are just to cute
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incredible! this is pricless! love it! you go!
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heh.
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You know this is so sweet. I totally love it. It brought a smile to my face to read. Well done!
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Great rolling lyrics
I like the flow of this, its got awesome meter.
Very clever work here.
S
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Thanks for the giggles, Poet...
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Sweet!
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Tee hee
Cute song. Made me grin.
Funny story-- I'm working on a song that's kinda similar.
Here're a couple verses:
If you want to call me 'Kitten'
Kitten,
Go right ahead
If you want to call me 'Sweet-cheeks'
Sweetness,
Best leave that unsaid
If you want to call me 'Girly,'
Surely,
You won’t mind 'Bear'
If you want a little Somethin'
Somethin',
I'll make sure I'm there
It's like the girl version of your song!
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This was a great write... Nice flow and rhyme... Made me smile from ear to ear...
illusion
Edited on Aug 20, 2:42 p.m. because ''. -
this was hilarious and cute at the same time! made me smile (the cute part) and laugh (the lechurous thoughts). what a great little piece! made me happy, thanks.
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Thanks Cathy and Myra! I know that you did not enjoy the lyric as much as I enjoy hearing "Oh, Al", but I appreciate the high praise.
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Deliciously Entertaining
Now DO IT ... SING IT!
Myra -
Wonderful
"Oh Al"! This is wonderful, I smiled right trough.
Cathy
xx
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