I'm sitting at the window,
Wondering where he is.
He should be here by now,
I haven't seen a glimpse yet.
How could he stand me up like this?
I don't think I can wait much longer
30...
40...
50...
AN HOUR!!...
Finally I see him
I run out of the house
Almost bumping into him
He has to have it today...
He smiles sweetly and nods his head,
We both know why I am there.
He hands me my mail,
and I quickly flip threw it.
A scream escapes my lips,
yes today it got here.
The love letter from my baby,
So far away, off at war.
I run to the house ripping the envelope open,
glancing over my shoulder I yell "thank you!"
Author notes
Option 17 A letter from my baby always makes my day!
Written August 17th, 2006
A contest entry
- Family Of Favorites Contest #3 by wings of an angel.
300 points, ended August 18, 2006, 2 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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cute little poem...i like it...
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WOW... This is so beautiful Chelsea!!! You did a great job on this... I don't know what I would do if Matt even seriously thought about going into the military!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
Great poem. It's wonderful you still get so excited over a love letter. I guess we all do. Very emoitonal. Very well written. Good luck in the contest. ttyl Tali
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This is a very good write that you had penned here good luck in the contest
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