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Two Spirits (I)

I awake from the darkest depths of my own mind,
Only to find more darkness in the depths of my room,
You and I are one in the same.

It...you...consume me, but like you say we are one in the same,
But in other ways..your nothing like me
An inbodyment of hatred that tries to confuse me, without me you are nothing
But the same applies to you, without me YOUR nothing.

I will break free from your confusion and influence on me,
I have to.
Leave my life, leave my family, leave my friends,
Leave me!

Almost all hope is lost, my own personal torment and torture continue,
Unseen by those around me....But still,
I hold on to one thing, something that gives me courage,
Something that make me myself again
And for that....I'm never letting go of hope.

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Written August 17th, 2006

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  • Angelshadow
    October 7, 2008
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    Sad.
    My stomach hurts now.

  • Jim Fear
    November 21, 2006

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    nice its the side of cachill i did not no existed

    i think you should do one of the following:
    go to therapy
    ride a bike
    get naked
    start a revoulotion
    or eat some pie because here comes sickness