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Pour Out The Rain

* Daddy, when I get to heaven *
* Do you think I'll get my wings *
* And Mommy, when I get to heaven *
* Do you think god could use another angel *
* To help pour out the rain *

* Daddy, do you think they smile *
* Mommy, do you think they cry *
* Daddy, when I get to heaven *
* Do you think go could use another angel *
* To help pour out the rain *

* Mommy, do you still think I will be beautiful *
* Daddy, Will you be there waiting for me *
* Mommy, can I take puppy with me *
* And Daddy, do you think god could use another angel *
* To help pour out the rain *

Author notes

I wrote this for all my angels. I am lucky to have them in my life :)
Written April 12th, 2003

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  • mad-malteaser
    April 13, 2003
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    Overwhelming sadness. To lose a child has got to be one of the worst things imaginable. Lovely write.