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In Love

My heartstrings tug,
whilst butterflies unfold,
my heart skips a beat,
and I feel light-headed.

A smile lights my face,
and my eyes twinkle,
I have goose pimples,
and eye contact is mutual.

I feel his presence,
his touch is soft and warm,
lips passionately pressed,
and I feel right at home.

So this is love,
deep feelings on top,
we are united as one,
nothing will ruin this,
and I am in love.

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A poem about the moment you realise that you are in love.
Written August 17th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • k8theseer
    August 17, 2006
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    thankyou for your comment! I love being in love! (does that make sense???) For me it's the best feeling in the world!!!!!

  • BloodStainedTears
    August 17, 2006
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    well..isn't love a great feeling? but I didn't know i was in love till i thought i lost him and my world broke...that was how i knew i was in love...you did a good job..keep up the good work
    -sae-