You came along
When I needed you most,
You held my hand,
You held me close.
You showed me that
the sun will shine
and that life isn't bad
all the time.
You gave me a hug
When I needed it most,
Sometimes virtual,
Sometimes real.
Somehow you always
Seem to know
Exactly how I feel.
You have a shoulder
For me to lean on
When I cannot stand alone,
You help me see
That I am strong,
And I'm never on my own.
I'm so grateful for all
That you do for me,
And I have been from the start,
And each night I look up
And thank the stars
For a wonderful friend
With a caring heart.
Author notes
Dedicated to my friends here !
Written August 17th, 2006
What did you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
Purefriendship..its a honest,nice write.You have reavealed very well the importance of afreind.
-
This is really lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!! Made me smile!
:-) -
"""I'm so grateful for all
That you do for me,
And I have been from the start,
And each night I look up
And thank the stars
For a wonderful friend
With a caring heart."""
I have friends like this. This piece just made me want to shed a tear. I know that when trouble comes, a friend like this makes ALL the difference. Wonderfully expressed piece. I wanted to put the entire poem in the comments. Great write! Keep it up! -
Thank you dear Reloute n Vanessa Reen for the soothing lines.
I do the best that I can do
And hope that you will understand
That everything belongs to you AP Poetic friends !
regards n wishes
subbu
-
This is one of the hardest poems to work out I have read in a while. I can see it in two ways; either each stanza is suppose to represent a new type of poem format, or you havent quite settled on a style within the whole poem. If you were going for rhyming, I think that the couplets should be checked, and the rhythm just to make sure that it flows. Other than that I think this is great! Raw emotion and passion all the way through and creativeness throughout, well done!!
Alias xxx -
What a lovely heart warming and touching poem. I really enjoyed this.
-
sometimes virtual (as in hug)... so true, there is much cyber love to be had, thanks for sharing x
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
1 old applause
