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Afraid

"I'm afraid...it's all falling apart
Inside of my head,"
Oh my God,
What have I said?

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Written August 16th, 2006

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  • gitu
    September 19, 2006
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    Hi there sis! This is a very gripping write. In only a few words you have conveyed so much. To realize that you have put words to a thought (be it forbidden or unwanted) can be a very breath-catching moment, and you have captured that moment very eloquently...I hope all is well with you ~ James


  • Neptunian Scorpion
    August 17, 2006
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    Good

    I am a fan of the short poems, they generally have a bit more potency, just like this one. Well written.

    Dimitri


  • paullallady silver member
    August 17, 2006
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    very good

    You put a lot of emotion into this one heartwrenching piece. You rip at the readers emotions. very good


  • PoetrysAngel2041
    August 17, 2006
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    Short and to the point, with the message coming across loud and clear. Excellent job. This poem was beautifully penned. Cant wait to see more by you soon


  • Vagabond Samurai
    August 17, 2006
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    You have a strong penchant for conjuring powerful emotion in such a small frame. This fills my stomach with butterflies at the possibilities of what you are referring to...


  • Steven Morris
    August 16, 2006
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    I hope this isn't referring to what I think it is hon A lot of emotion in such few words. I hope everything is ok with you, even though it seems otherwise - Steve

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