From: Inspired by a Broken Heart
Date: Aug 15, 2006 2:41 PM
You burned me alive,
tortured my soul,
delivered me to the evil within your heart,
but I came back for you.
You shattered my dreams,
abused my love,
cast me into the fire,
but I came back for you.
Now I am your savior,
I am your hero,
holding you above the flames,
but everything will be alright,
I am here for you.
I have re-payed my debt,
the world will remember what I have done for you,
For the rest of your life,
you will know how it feels to be alone,
I will never come back for you.
~Vance
Author notes
I guess I might as well go ahead and show this to the world... I wrote this in retaliation from the hatred I got out of my last relationship. It is supposed to represent the unfaltering love I offered until the bitter end....
Written August 16th, 2006
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i definitely feel the intensity of this piece and rising aggravated feelings. well done!
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