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Love Is

Love is looking for him every morning
  and smiling when you see him
  and crying if you don't
Love is knowing when you're needed
  and when he needs to be alone
Love is secret jokes that only you can laugh to
  shared private smiles that no one else knows
Love is that secret language that you speak with him
  silent conversations saying more than a thousand words
Love is putting aside fear for trust
  trying something new because you know that he'll be there
Love is adoring him for everything he has
  all the good things with the bad
Love is knowing what to do and say
  to comfort him and make him glad
Love is dressing up for no one but him
  trying for ages for something "just right"
  then tossing it away because it doesn't matter
  and he'll love you just the same

<3

Author notes

I'd love some feedback on this one...should I put punctuation in? I wasn't sure. Maybe stanzas instead of just indenting? Please let me know.
Written June 1st, 2006

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  • akid100
    August 16, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, that was amazingly fast...since I just posted the poem a few minutes ago.

  • akid100
    August 16, 2006
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    Thank you, that's how it felt to me. Not so true now unfortunately...it's interesting. Love seems to be different for each person. It's amazing.


  • Black Eyed Angel
    August 16, 2006
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    I thought it was perfect the way you wrote it.....I absolutely loved it. It speaks the truth in words of joy and understanding. I enjoyed it very much. This is truly the meaning of love and this means that you know what it takes to love someone....so when you find that perfect someone...I hope you treat them this way.....

    ~Rose~

  • JennyFerFer
    August 16, 2006
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    a wonderful description of Love. Really it was.