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Static

Hello, can you hear me?
I
Man, this has been one ruff patch lately, You know I could really use some help.
I l-
Yeah so, what’s with all the silence on Your side of things, huh?
I lo-
And anyway what’s with all this crap anyway? I didn’t ask for any of this. This was not what I prayed for!
I lov-
You know, forget You if You don’t even care enough to even answer me why should I even bother with You!
I love
Man things are just getting plain messed up down here! You don’t even seem to give a crap!
I love y-
Fine if that’s the way You want it to be then screw You I’m better off on my own!
I love yo-
Lord please, I just really need to know that You care.
I love you.
Oh, sorry I wasn’t listening.

Author notes

I just kind of thought this up the other day thinking about how some times we get so caught up in asking for stuff or whining to God that we never bother to even listen to Him.
Written August 16th, 2006

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  • Ifly4you
    August 30, 2006
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    I really like this makes a great point! chow
    nocolor


  • Master Warious
    August 18, 2006
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    wonderful!

    Whoa! That was so cool!!!!!!!!!
    I love the way you wrote that.
    And its true, sometimes ('kay maybe a lot of times) we really don't take the time to listen to God.
    Sorry I haven't reviewed your stuff in a while. I've been busy getting ready for college. -_-'
    So yah, anyway, good stuff girl! You keep at it!
    (I will have to applaud later as I have run out for today)


  • purple wings
    August 16, 2006
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    i like it...i like it alot!