The same melancholic routine playing through my mind
Easing into my melting heart
In abundance of nothing but cliche lines of emotions
The same thing repeated, the same lies told
Nothing stops the way I need you
Holding you in my arms
I feel the fragments of your rejection
Apathetic through the eyes of society
Remove your palm from my chest
In crimson waves, I bleed
This one last embrace we share, I shall cherish
Shall we dance, for my love of life is fleeting
Iron gates create shadows into foreseen misfortunes
My life no longer has sense - only false reassurance
I celebrate for what I have achieved
- The knowledge that I will die in the arms of a loved one
Author notes
This doesn't feel like it's finished. Any honest ideas/critiques would be appreciated.
KThanks =]
Written August 16th, 2006
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this is really good. i can't think of any ways to improve it, i like it as it is. good job. =]
hope you're doing well.
have a nice day!
- tina =] -
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Sarah I love it. Ive missed you, whats up?! Any way, the poem was good, I love to see a large vocabulary.
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