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Cheesecake 3

I like to pine my nights away,
lost in a bottle and cigarette smoke
thinking of somwhere else,
anywhere else, but here.

I like to dream my days away,
hide behind a drum riser,
answer every A.M. page,
incase it's you on the other end.

But you don't call anymore.
Distance and logic won out
over passion and desire.
You still make me smile.

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Written August 16th, 2006

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  • Danna Hobart
    September 28, 2007
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    Here's to cheesecake...


  • Sarah957
    August 12, 2007

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    I like to pine my nights away,
    lost in a bottle and cigarette smoke
    thinking of somwhere else,
    anywhere else, but here.

    I know how THAT is!

  • Son of Jim
    August 16, 2006
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    Now has become a diary/journal entry. As stand alones they are maybe evasive, maybe ethereal, but now seems to be repetitive thoughts, like day to day journal entry.