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Cheesecake 2

The anticipation of you devours me,
I ingest every email, text, the rare phone call,
as if it were the breath of life.

Losing you consumes me,
eats at me; a virus, a parasite,
ever present in the back of my mind.

Don’t go. Don’t stop. Don’t leave me here
crippled without you, suffocating in guilt.
I am only as weak as you’ve made me.

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Written August 16th, 2006

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  • Danna Hobart
    September 28, 2007
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    This one too. So sad. Sigh...


  • Sarah957
    August 12, 2007
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    I am intruiged! Youve got me hooked now, Im off to read another one...


  • iamaparadox
    September 9, 2006
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    I love this.

  • Son of Jim
    August 16, 2006
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    Masculine, timely again, which I would work away from. Nothing new yet.