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In the beginning it was great.
I could float along the breeze,
And not be afraid to breath.
It was love once,
But now I have to say,
So I don't lie anymore,
That it's not love anymore.

I thought I needed you;
I thought you would make me whole.
I was wrong about both,
And I'm afraid I screwed up both of our lives.

I'm sorry and sad to have to say this.
You don't know how much it hurts me to tell you.
I don't want to tell you,
But I also know I can't keep up this one lie.

I have tried,
It didn't work.
You knew something was wrong,
And it's that I'm not there with you anymore.
I left, my heart with me,and you all alone.

I never wanted to be the one,
I never wanted to have to tell you this,
I never thought this would happen, no one did really.
But it has,
It's over.

I'm done living this lie,
I'm done with you,
And everything we were.
You can take everything back,
I don't want the memories.

I'm sorry that I must say this,
once in for all I must end one lie of my life.
I'll end them all one day,
But this will be the first.

You were never really the one for me.
You never will be the one for me.
It's over.
We are through.
I can't take it anymore.
You and me?
We are just gone, done, and through.

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Written August 15th, 2006

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  • Teen In The Shadows
    October 15, 2007

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    Before you get into this comment, I'm giving you the option to read or just delete. It doesn't matter to me because I know basically anything I say has no meaning to you at all.


    It wasn't you that screwed up our lives. It was all me and I kno it was. I was foolish and blinded by lust. I feel that I will eventually go to hell for my sins and I hope I do for what I did. I know this will mean absolutely nothing, but I'm sorry. I really am. I don't know why but you have been on my mind and it hurts like no other. I just wish I could take a step back in time and stop myself and what i lost; a beautiful wonderful girl like yourself.


  • Burning Hope
    August 17, 2006
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    Thanks Kara. I'll let you know!


  • OnlyInMyDreams
    August 17, 2006
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    gosh. im so sorry that things ended like this. please tell me what he says, unless its too personal or something. but i would like to know. and on the plus side it was a great poem, i honestly just dont know what else to say.

    I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Kara


  • Burning Hope
    August 16, 2006
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    Carrie, It all completely true.


  • IridescentRose
    August 16, 2006
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    ??????? Is this in any way true? Something happen, Amanda...?

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