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Forbidden Love

She lusted for someone she couldn't have
And in his eyes she could see he wanted her too
It wasn't right, it wasn't legal

He was 21
I was 14

The Lust for a Forbidden love was overwhelming
And slips of the eyes caught her parents attention
Not right, Not legal....
their eyes met less and less everyday, but...

The Lust for a Forbidden love was overwhelming
And lips began to slip...
One kiss was all it took....

He wanted her just as much as she wanted him
But it wasn't right,
Wasn't legal

She had a boyfriend...

a goodbye kiss...?

The lust for a Forbidden love was overwhelming and hands...legs...bodies... began to slip

One goodbye kiss turned into several goodbye kisses, but...

The lust for a Forbidden love was overwhelming and fingers&& mouths began to slip...

He came over so they could talk...so they could end this, it wasn't right..
Wasn't legal...but...

The lust for a Forbidden love was overwhelming and minds began to slip...

Not to far...

She HAD A BOYFRIEND!!!
   
Forbidden love...

Stopped...ended..


!FORBADE!

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Written August 15th, 2006

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  • NomadicSoul
    August 29, 2006
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    Sammi, it's been a while. ^_^ I like the poem, it's pretty different. ...as long as we're not talking about reality here... Right?
    Edited on Aug 29, 9:13 p.m. because ''.