I will tell you a sad tale
About a very sad whale
On his mate he cheated
Got her overheated
His excuses she did spurn
Vowing never to return
Our whale is very lonely
Misses his one and only
Nightly hear his plaintive plea
Blubber please come back to me.
Author notes
Written April 12th, 2003
Purple Bananas.
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- ok...this is a weird contest because i have never done a poetry one so here'e the rules.... by UnFoRgIvEnSINS.
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Wow, blubber and all, eh? thanks for your entry and good luck lol
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This was a really cute piece. I honestly didnt think it was to funny...until I read the last line. I really liked your last line! Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
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I like it. Your poem is really cute and funny. Great pick on choose a whale for the character of your poem. I just love the whole thing!
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thats cute...lol..good luck!
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'Blubber'...hee hee!!
Very cute tale Bill.
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