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Whatever...

Wandering....
Have you ever caught yourself wandering?
Staring...
Have you ever caught yourself staring?
Crying..
Have you ever caught yourself crying?
Dying.
Have you ever been dying?

I die inside a little more each day
This is why I always pray
You will be there to help me through
To mold and make me all anew.

Reaching for something you cannot see
I am reaching for something within me
Running to find my place in life
I am running for a reason not to die.

Laughing....
Playing...
Kissing..
Hugging.
and Dying
Dying again.. it always leads there
Life is nothing but a test you see
But if you think life is fair
Just look at what it dealt me.

Author notes

I have no idea what this is suppose to be but I am tired of writing things that make sense.. maybe that is why I wrote this imparticular. Hope everyone likes...Justine
Written August 15th, 2006

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  • SexyAngel0418
    August 16, 2006
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    This is awesome justine!!! Very different and very deep... This is a well written piece... Keep up the good work!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth (Your AP MommY)


  • Paint Me Beautiful
    August 16, 2006
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    oh justine justine..where did this come from?!...dying?..you better not die or ill..ill..ill kill you!..i love you girl..be happy

  • Kyrie Eleison
    August 15, 2006
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    GREAT JOB

    WOW THIS IS AN EXTREMELY POWERFUL POEM. NOT TO MENTION VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!!! AMAZING, GREAT JOB