Still fat, still ugly,
as none of that was left behind,
feels, alone, and unsteady, what's to cause
this of which is unknown.
So pretty, so skinny, they say as they envy her,
if only they knew the real her.
They only see the outside, of which she shows,
but yet none know of what lies inside.
A girl who cries out for help,
only seeming to be silenced by
her own hands.
Knowing all of her imperfections.
She wishes she could be free,
Still fat, still ugly
still felt left alone.
Some one rescue this poor soul, from
which one suffers.
If only other knew the real her
Author notes
I was really upset when I wrote this poem. I don't think it makes that much sense, I think it's all of my emotions jubbled into a couple of frases. Tell me what you think
Written August 15th, 2006
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asome write of emotoin here hun. stay strong. don't be who they want you to be, be yourself always and forever, bc being who they want you to be will only make you sad and empty in the end. hope things start lookin up. if you wanna talk you know where to find me
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aw this is sad. i hope u feel better life is hard hang in there!
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This is a very sad and depressing poem. The way you have penned down your ideas is just wonderful. Keep it up. A great poem
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this seems like a pretty confusing yet hard topic to talk about...? i'm not sure what that person meant "more then an insult than a poem" maybe because i don't fully understand the situation. writing poems while being upset,never make much sense.merely becuase your brain races so fast in seconds,you don't have time to write all the emotions coming out at once. still,this poem was jammed packed with harsh realities. my favourite part was:
"A girl who cries out for help,
only seeming to be silenced by
her own hands."
i think it makes a huge statement,that every kid has the right to scream these words out,and not feel judged by screaming it. we all hide our emotions,we all want help,but we never admit it,barely to ourselves. great work,it was a nice read.
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Jonsie, look I'm sorry that i envy you at times, it something that i cant really control. Look, i'm not going to say that i know the real you, cause one, i cant really speak for you and two i dont even know the real me anymore lol. sorry i couldnt talk to you today. i went over lexi's for the movie, and we got invited for the bonfire. plus my cell phone sucks. sorry if you got you mad at all. i'll call you tomorrow so i can see if i can come early for your party. lovely poem, a little confusing but i think you got your point across. much love hun!
Isabel
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AWWWWWW JAMIE!!
!! So sad!! Because i can relate EXACTLY!! Oh wow.. Its like youve just taken everything i think and feel and put it on paper!!
I think its really sad though. No-one should feel like this. Things will get better
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more of an isult than a poem.
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