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Two Souls

Torment is whats left,
Wishing away the internal tears,
Over the moon within the stars.

Secretly in prayer,
On the hopes of becoming one again,
Under the sunrise within the sunset,
Love will be re-united,
Songs of praises will be heard.


Yvonne J. Griffin
8/15/06*

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Written August 15th, 2006

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  • pozo
    August 15, 2006
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    Great flow here The imagery here was great. Keep writing, this was a beautiful love poem
    Thanks for your comment
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Lightfoot
    August 15, 2006
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    welldone

    This is a very soul searching message. I believe you are a very reflective soul and look for divine approval which is the goal of those who seek truth.