It would take a thousand knives
to cut through your black heart
anticipation kills me
i cant wait to start
A stab for the lying
a slice for the pain
a rip for betrayal
a cut for insane
The sun has started sinking
there is no hope left for you
your tears only add to the fun
there is so much more to do
A carve for deceit
a twist for my tears
a drag for your lust
a plunge for my fears
I'm sorry fate has cheated you
but i had to hear your cries
I had to avenge a broken heart
and punish for your lies
Your poison blood surrounds me
your body limp with death
as i finish what I've begun
i steal your final breath
It didn't have to end like this
if it weren't for your black heart
lustful thoughts and cruel intent
condemned you from the start
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GORE
Written August 15th, 2006
A contest entry
- Vengeance by stormyserenity13.
300 points, ended November 15, 2006, 17 entries
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amazingly awesome
you should really do it....no joke.....i really LOVE this. like the twist for your tears...those are my fav. parts
its a very lovely poem of murder (seriously)
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DUDE! sick ass poem i heart it. its hot shit dude seriusly and i wish you could really kill him lol. anyways amazing job like always psh and u say u cant write? i ought to slap you!
muah!
i love you -
to the point and self explanatory!
great work would you like to read mine mjseattle "pleasure Principle"and my friend lisamepoet is truly living in this poem today she told her ol'man she would stab him in his heart just last night! you made her day!!!she whould have if he had one !!bastard!!
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