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The End

As the prophets shed the light on what's to come the crowds would gather
Your time is precious, they explained, no time to worry, the messiah is coming
Don't go to sleep tonight, darling, hold me in your arms
These will be our final days

Walls are falling, churches burning, women ravaged, children crying
Flesh is tearing, some still fighting for the pointless war
In this world of misery.

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Nobody know when the end is comeing for sure, so make up ur mind on ur thoughts and always be ready. No madder if u r christan or any other relgion or no relgion at all the world will end one day.
Written August 15th, 2006

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  • Closetpoet1971
    August 15, 2006
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    Well Written!

    A very well written piece. With quite a ring of truth to it. Thank you for sharing!!
    Shannon


  • SixtySevenMustang
    August 15, 2006
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    This actually reminded me, for some off reason, of the movie, "War Of The Worlds". It's actually quite true, as well.
    I believe you have one mistake though. I believe that you spelled coming wrong. [[ Your spelling, "comeing", right spelling, "coming" ]]
    Once again, short, but a great write.
    Edited on Aug 15, 12:39 because ''.