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Would you?

                       

                        If you could, would you love me?
                        Would you love me, if you could?
                            Could you?  Would you?
                              I could love you
                              I would love you
                              I do love you                       

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Written August 15th, 2006

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  • crimsondew silver member
    December 19, 2007
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    The thoughts running through a mind are well displayed here..like it!


  • grannyeri gold member
    August 20, 2007

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    Neat way you have put this poem together. Kind of like a play on words, using them, reusing them this way. Reaffirming what is there, I guess.


  • Deliverance
    February 1, 2007

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    Very cleverly done. I didn't quite get it the on the first read so I read it again and bingo. Maybe its because its late that it took me a second go, or maybe its because its so subtly clever. Anyway, very enjoyable read. Chris


  • Green Mother Rose
    December 10, 2006
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    cute

    short but cute...lol
    green mother rose


  • ParadiseBliss
    December 10, 2006
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    Wow! This is short and sweet. And the play of words is brilliantly witty. Way to go!
  • Puppydog gold member
    September 28, 2006
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    SO SWEET AND CARING

    So catchy and beautifully sweet

  • Rym Lover
    September 18, 2006
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    nice! I really enjoyed reading it!!!!

  • paullallady silver member
    September 18, 2006
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    good

    this is good. very soul searching. it is more like asking if they like you enough to love you. anyways, it is deep, thought provoking. good job on this.

  • MoonlightBeam
    September 9, 2006
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    This is a sweet poem.
    I really like it.
    Awesome job.
    Ttyl,
    Moon*

  • raggyann
    August 30, 2006
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    the question all has asked at some point in our lives
    great poem

  • babys-no-angel
    August 20, 2006
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    short and to the point nice xxx

  • August 17, 2006
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    Dreamy and full of longing!

  • BluRosePoet8488
    August 15, 2006
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    Ah ha! A play on words poem! A nice write. All good quesions indeed that I find myself asking sometimes. Keep the ink flowing. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~

  • Closetpoet1971 gold member
    August 15, 2006
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    well written and creative!

    A wonderful poem!! Asking questions I believe we have all posed at one point or the other in our love lives! Great work!
    Thanks for sharing
    Shannon

  • Mel-the-Believer
    August 15, 2006
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    short, sweet and to the point. I liked it. It was very good. Great work.

  • Water Color Sky
    August 15, 2006
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    Wow... interesting poem. =) I often wonder this myself. Thanks for sharing!
    Ashley

  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    August 15, 2006
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    I can only follow the comment of cheche-d-ame.
    I always love the questions in the poems..it gives you something to think over
    Thnxs for sharing
    XXJeannette

  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    August 15, 2006
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    aaahhhh...such questions that seem to be always asked , and then there are answers that only we know if we do love. I enjoyed this little play on things that go on in our heads at any given time.....
    zzzz
    reenie
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