Falling
Into your arms Away from you
I start to cry
For I love you so For I have lost you
And I don't ever
Want to let you go See myself with you again
Your love, so pure...
It brings my soul
Peace and Joy Pain and sorrow
And here I am again
Falling because of you
Author notes
Also, these to poems were writen in a style i used in thes poems: allpoetry.com/poem/2125007 .
The poem on the left talks about my current Girlfriend. I love her greatly and many of my poems are inspired by her. the one on the right was writen about an ex. I had pored out my heart for that one and she throw it all away without a reason...
(its read as such: "white + blue" and then reread "white + pink")
In a list
A contest entry
- No More Heroes by BrokenWings...Fly.
700 points, ended January 14, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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"Falling because of you"
Wow ^^ you kinda write two poems in one, ne?
I really like how you wrote half about your current girlfriend, and half about your exgirlfriend
There are mixed feelings here-- love and loss, happiness and sorrow. Thank you so much for entering this awesome poem into my contest. Best of luck.. And keep it up!
-Rayne
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Wonderful Whirling Words.
wow....This poem is exactly how I feel. lol. Love can twist you and turn you until everything is left and yet nothing is. I love this poem. I wish you good luck in the contest. <3 *Jo* -
great
yes..this is a reallly good poem...you did great and went way beyond expectations... great job and good luck. -
thank you ^^
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This is a really good poem. I really like it...
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