There's nothing left to say
Even when it rains
Time is changing
Change of Heart
There are no words to explain
Love is like an empty page
Breakup is the same
Sometimes saying nothing
Will make you feel the pain
The words are disappearing
My world is simply shaking
I feel that things are changing
But I can't say why
There's nothing left to say
Where everything has been said
Or somethings where never said enough
Cause it's hard to know where we stand
If all we do is lie
I guess we're getting older
When all the words are gone
I don't know what you look like
It feels like I'm alone
There's nothing left to say
When you look like a stranger
Life might just be easier apart
Even if it hurts
Author notes
Written August 15th, 2006
A contest entry
- I need an A.P. Family by Blackchlid.
375 points, ended March 9, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TEENAGERS - We're not all thick, yeah? by LaurenLightning--x.
1200 points, ended June 18, 2007, 35 entries
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Sometimes I often wonder/believe solitude always, is better than losing love over and over.
Im probabaly wrong though(and just a bitter hater
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Beautifully Done
I love the cliche in this write ... you open up your mind to another world and reach in and take whats yours ... this is a powerful piece ... and deffinately understanding ... I don't feel that this write was forced ... i don't believe that any write is forced ... I believe that poetry is what you make of it ... and feelings can be brought out in so many ways ... but with poetry ... you jot down how you feel ... when you feel it ... and it comes from the heart and soul of yourself ... you have done a wonderful job with this write ... and i believe you have a talent that can go a long way ... keep up the good work sweetheart ... and just know that there is light at the end of the tunnel ... breath deep and take a breath ... life is full of suprises ... very well done ... good luck in the contest ...
Much Luv & Respect
Sparkeh
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Thank you so much for your comment.
Cliche or not I really did not care...I wrote this poem during a very diffcult period of my life...when I was dealing with an relationship....I thought I was in love but at last it was only an "empty page".
And I agree with you with poetry being forced....when I wrote this poem I wrote it down the way I was feeling...I wasn't thinking about structure or anything like that....so I'm glad someone else agree's with me...poetry can be force if its from the heart
Thank you again...with so much love
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this one sounds a litle to forced with the rhyming and its to cliche
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forgive...this write is kinda old. is there anything i can do to fix it or can you just DQ and I'll enter a better write?
laters
~Bloved~
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Mhmm..
This is a beautiful write.
Very strong and full of emotion.
I love the lines :
Love is like an empty page
Breakup is the same
I love that! "Empty page" it describes the feeling well, and put a lovely picture of a blank - waiting to be written - book, in my head. Brilliant.
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WOW well done. This is filled with such power and emotion and it is oh so very true for a lot of people, again very well written!!!
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This poem has captured the exact words that my mind has been saying to me. It's amazing how you put it into words that flow wonderfully. Thanks for a great read
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