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Coming Clean

I'm coming clean
I'm setting everyone straight
I refuse to lie
I refuse to hide
I'm coming out
with my head held high

Very few people know
but why should I be ashamed?
or scared?
I want everyone to know
how I think!
how I feel!
and what I think love is really about!

Mom, Dad....Family...I love you
but I can't hide what's in my heart
I hope you can still love me
but if not....
I'm better off alone anyway

I want to be free
to be honest
honest to you and honest to me
I've hidden a major part of my identity
and it's beginning to affect my sanity

So I'll say it now!
And I'll say it PROUD!
I'M A FUCKIN LESBIAN!!!!!

Author notes

My deffinition of love: Not basing a life long decision based on certain parts of the male or female anatomy..or on what's \
Written August 14th, 2006

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  • lovedxinxsighs
    March 24, 2007

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    i love the ending and i totally understand your emotions. "i've hidden a major part of me and its beginning to affect my sanity." i like that line. i relate to that one the most. great job


  • Cyanide Milkshake
    January 30, 2007

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    Lol, 'I'M A FUCKING LESBIAN!' i love it.
    'I hope you can still love me
    but if not....
    I'm better off alone anyway' - I agree, if someone can't love you for who you are then you're better off without them, even though it would be a tragedy to lose them. I hope everyone took it well, and bollocks to them if they didn't x x x

  • toggle
    December 12, 2006

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    nice! very emotionally filled. i def. giggled a bit when you ironically said "i'm setting everyone straight" lol. i loved it. good luck!


  • ISheHer
    December 6, 2006
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    very nice... i wish i could do that... i love how you ended it.

    So I'll say it now!
    And I'll say it PROUD!
    I'M A FUCKIN LESBIAN!!!!!


    i really like the fact that you use the word fuck..lol..

  • Chrysta
    September 7, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment.


  • Fading Illusionist
    September 6, 2006
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    Very nice. Always good to see people that refuse to hide or be something else because of society's standards.

    Go you!

  • Chrysta
    August 15, 2006
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    thanks for the comment i'm tryin to come clean lets see if my family will just accept it
    anyway i greatly appreciate the comment...


  • JUGULAR vain
    August 15, 2006
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    exspressive

    good on you, sending this msg out
    i know many ppl who just dont say then they just leave a note and you never see them again, but i feel better admiting my problems

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