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Love


 I know his kiss is ever lasting
 I fly ever so high up through the sky
 Flying high until I reach the moon
 Floating down to Earth and in his arms
 I know his love is like a kiss evermore
 He embraces me his breath so sweet like
 a rose he opens himself more for me
 I am so overwhelmed with love of his kiss
 He feels as though he is falling and I am to
 catch him everlasting love is always fee l
 his kiss upon my skin and he lifts me higher
 So I ask to myself that what I am feeling
 Is love with desire for is it love or lust that
 I desire for love or lust is what all desire
 I have only wondered as I fly higher is it love
 Or lust for that I so desire I have found the love
 for which I have wondered for so long for his love
 is like the rose that opened up to me from within
 I to wonder what it is love or lust for which he
 desires as his heart beats I Finlay think that it
 is love and lust that both desire.

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Love is what I wondered and love or lust is what I desire
I am flying ever so higher for love or lust is what I desire
Written August 15th, 2006

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  • SEA angel gold member
    August 15, 2006
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    Love is often a mask lust wears.

    Someone told me this once and I'd never considered "love or lust" connection. We women always are turned off by advances unless a man wants to make "love".

    A person told me though, at roots, really both are the same in that aspect from a male and female perspective... Love and lust. Movies package to women that lust is okay just so is considered love yet, regardless, is it really love or lust? Just as you say.


    Edited on Aug 15, 12:15 because ''.