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a lonly promise

I'm all alone in here,
i am afraid,
where the birds fear to fly,
where the moths have no light,
all alone,
i sit here,
and wait.

i want out,
i need out,
i feel air,
i need air,
i see no life,
but i know it's there.

the promise of tomorrow,
hangs in the air,
i need to care,
i need some love,
from the dove,
now my life can go on.

I'm not alone in here,
I'm not afraid,
where the birds can fly,
where the moths have a light,
i am here and i not alone.

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Written August 15th, 2006

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  • Shepherdess
    January 2, 2007
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    love you mum


  • Glass Heart
    August 16, 2006
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    Wow, great job. I liked the ryhming. I have written many songs but can't seem to make any music that fits it. You're lucky that you can do that. Great write.
    ~K~

  • Shepherdess
    August 16, 2006
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    Hi Lou LOu love this One error bottom line I ahould be I'm
    lone mummsie


  • No deliverance
    August 15, 2006
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    "the promise of tomorrow,
    hangs in the air,
    i need to care,
    i need some love,
    from the dove,
    now my life can go on. "


    "the promise of tomorrow,
    hangs in the air,
    i need to care,
    i need some love,
    from the dove,
    now my life can go on."


    MY GOD!! My dear lil daughter!

    This is so beautiful, the shift from the sadness and loneliness, to the happiness and comfort is just anazing.
    You did a great job sweety!!!!

    Keep on writing.

    Love and kisses.

    Your AP mummy.
    ~Hana~